Student or Learner
I am trying to write a statment for college admission and can anybody give comments about the following sentnece?
.1... so, I think I can do better than other students in 'Business of IT' department of XX college If I am admitted.
2. I already took classes ( or learned, or studied about???) Java programming, Network OSI and Operation system structures , which senior students of your college are required to take.
3. I think no students know better than me about thease areas.
4. I am a 12th intake member of YLC( young leaders club) and I had a lot of opprotunites to make a presentation and increase my knowledge.