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    bosun is offline Senior Member
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    in the third grade

    Is the following sentence correct?

    1. When I was in the third grade in primary school, I got interested in computers and got gradually used to using computers.

    2.The Internet spreaded out all over the world and as the Internet became more popular, more and more people want to work at companies which are related to the Internet service.

    3. I have grown with exposed environment in IT society because my father worked in this field.

    4. I know a lot of It, so I think it could be a big advantage if I major IT in your university.

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    Tdol is offline Editor, UsingEnglish.com
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    Re: in the third grade

    The Internet spreaded- spread
    and as the Internet became more popular - and as it
    people want- wanted (to go with the previous verb)
    I have grown with exposed environment in IT- I grew up with a lot of exposure to the IT environment...
    I know a lot of It,- about IT
    could be a big advantage - for whom?

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    Re: in the third grade

    1. When I was in the third grade in primary school, I developed an interest in computers and got gradually used to using them.

    2.The Internet spread all over the world and, as the Internet became more popular, more and more people wanted to work for companies specializing in Internet services.

    4. I know much about It, so I think it would be to my advantage if I earned a major IT at your university.

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