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    bosun is offline Senior Member
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    statement

    Can i say as follows when I write a personal statement for college admission?

    I examined curriculumn guides of other universities and I found out that your school is more specialized in the field of IT.

    2. I alslo heared that your faculty are always prepare new students with their excellent knoweldge.

    3.I feel confident that you will be satisfied with me and my abilites.

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    Anglika is offline No Longer With Us
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    Re: statement

    Quote Originally Posted by bosun View Post
    Can i say as follows when I write a personal statement for college admission?

    I have examined curriculum guides for other universities and I found out have noted/see that your school is more specialized in the field of IT.

    2. I also heard that your faculty are [singular noun/singular verb - is "faculty" the correct word to use? ] always prepare [clarify what you mean by "prepared" here] new students with their excellent knowledge.

    Alternative phrasing:

    I have heard that students on your courses are always very well taught.

    3.I feel confident that you will be satisfied with me and my abilities.
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