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    bosun is offline Senior Member
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    confidence or decide

    Can anybody give me some coments on the following sentences?

    1.I didn't have confidence to start studying again to apply to another university after I failed the university entrace exam.

    2.It looked so difficult to get admission from xx university.

    3. the cross cuntry travel was my turning point. THat is, through this experience ,, I decided to apply to your school.

    4. Also, my self-confidence became storng after I successfully finished cross country travel.

    5. After the travel, I prepared to apply to your school

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    susiedqq is offline Key Member
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    Re: confidence or decide

    Just some suggestions . . .


    1.After failing the university entrance exam, I didn't have the confidence to start studying again in order to apply to another university.

    2.It seemed difficult to get accepted to xx university.

    3. The cross country travel experience was my turning point. After that, I decided to apply to your school.

    4. Also, I developed a stronger self-confidence after successfully finishing cross country travel.

    5. After traveling, I began to prepare the application to your school

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