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I tried to translate an old story into English. But I am sure that there are a lot of mistakes, and I would be grateful if you would correct it for me.The word "it" in the second sentence refers to the story.
Briefly, that is Deli Dumrul's story. One upon a time, there was a place named Oguz, and there lived Duha Koca's son Deli Dumrul. He built a bridge over a dry stream, and if you wished to cross the bridge you had to pay him 33 akce (currency). If you refused to cross the bridge, he took 40 akce from you and he bludgeoned you as well.
So God says: "Look at that crazy man! He does not know his hegemony, and he is not thankful to me."
After that, God ordered the Angel of Death: "Go at once. Threaten him with death, and then kill him."
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