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    Post Please correct the following sentences

    As you instructed, we took two workmen from the compound for the following work to be carried out in our Office compound as freelancers.

    1. Gardener who wiil be commenced his duty on 15 April 2008, and
    salary would be $xxx per month.
    2. Swimming pool worker who has commenced his duty on 15 March 2008,
    and salary would be $xxx per month.


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    Re: Please correct the following sentences

    As you instructed, we transferred two workmen from the compound to our office compound.
    for the following work to be carried out freelance t1.A gardener who will commence work on 15 April 2008, (his) salary amounting to
    $xxx per month.
    2. A swimming pool worker who commenced work on 15 March 2008,
    (his) salary amounting to $xxx per month.

    just a suggestion
    Last edited by beascarpetta; 30-Mar-2008 at 12:15. Reason: word order

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