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    pierre legle Guest

    can you understand that?

    Dear experts,
    is good English, can you correct mistakes,please? This is a part of my cover letter.

    phone number :909090909090909uy

    Before I came to Berlin I had been a German teacher in Belgium for a long time. I worked in hospitality industry (in ..) but now I am about to change my career and go into IT profession. While doing my IT courses with xxxx Company I am looking for a part time job. I am very reliable and mature person. I am good at computers and movies are my great interests/passion. If you find my candidature appropriate, please call me on the above number.

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    jamiep is offline Member
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    Re: can you understand that?

    Quote Originally Posted by pierre legle View Post
    Dear experts,
    is good English, can you correct mistakes,please? This is a part of my cover letter.

    phone number :909090909090909uy

    Before I came to Berlin I had been a German teacher in Belgium for a long time. I worked in the hospitality industry (in ..) but now I am about to change my career and go into the IT profession. While doing my IT courses with xxxx Company I am looking for a part time job. I am a very reliable and mature person. I have computer skills and movies are my great interest and passion. If you find my candidature appropriate, please call me on the above number.
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