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    peter123 is offline Senior Member
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    place

    Hi there,

    Please proofread the following sentences.

    The park is very quiet at night so walking alone in the park is very dangerous.

    thanks
    pete

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    Re: place

    the sentence is grammatically correct.
    However, you might consider '...park can be very dangerous' or '...park could be very dangerous'.

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    Re: place

    I agree with David. From a stylistic viewpoint, I would try to avoid the repetition of 'park', however.

    As an example:

    The park is very quiet at night so walking there alone can be very dangerous.

    - Q

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