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    Smile It's grammar and puntuation correct?

    I'm so excited its going to be my first day as a teacher, I can't wait! I want you to know that I was ready for this moment long time ago. One afternoon, in a small church in Hopewell Virginia ,The Holy Spirit reveal me that this was my path to teach and to take care of the little ones. I know my Lord feels very proud of me because I am doing what He wants me to do.


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    Re: It's grammar and puntuation correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by Liz0208 View Post
    I'm so excited. It's going to be my first day as a teacher. I can't wait! I want you to know that I was ready for this moment a long time ago. One afternoon, in a small church in Hopewell, Virginia, the Holy Spirit revealed to me that this was my path - to teach and to take care of the little ones. I know my Lord feels very proud of me because I am doing what He wants me to do.
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    Last edited by Anglika; 05-Apr-2008 at 00:00.

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    Re: It's grammar and puntuation correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by Liz0208 View Post
    I'm so excited. It's going to be my first day as a teacher. I can't wait! I want you to know that I have been ready for this moment since a long time. One afternoon, in a small church in Hopewell Virginia, the Holy Spirit revealed to me that this is my path to teach and to take care of the little ones. I know my Lord feels very proud of me because (now) I am doing what he wants me to do.
    I am not a teacher and maybe I have missed some mistakes.

    Snowcake


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    Re: It's grammar and puntuation correct?

    I am doing what he wants me to do

    By convention, when citing God in this way, the pronoun has a capital letter, so the original was correct.

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    Re: It's grammar and puntuation correct?

    Thank you. I haven't know that before.

    Interesting.
    I learn something new every day.

    Snowcake
    Last edited by Snowcake; 09-Apr-2008 at 23:44.

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