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    #1

    Please correct me

    I had double checked with the tooling information from the old staff of ABC company, please review and see whether this (information) is useful or not, the details are as follows :
    1. Model xxx : the main front part was stocked in xxx factory; and the accessory
    was stored
    I still checking the remaining tooling status, will keep you posted on


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    Re: Please correct me

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    I have double-checked the tooling information from the staff who worked for ABC company. Please review and see whether this (information) is useful or not. The details are as follows:

    1. Model xxx : the main front part was stocked in xxx factory;

    2. The accessories [??spare parts] were stored [where were they stored?]


    I still checking the remaining tooling status and will keep you posted on
    I am unhappy about your use of "tooling information". To me, this is the specification needed to set up a manufacturing process. What is your understanding of the term?

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