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    about a soccer player

    Can you please correct any mistakes in the following sentence about a famour soccer player?

    XX runs for a famous soccer club XX in England. During 2006 and 2007 session, he scored many goals, but during 2007 and 2008 session, he hurt his kness and did not score as many goals as he did during last session. So, he was out during the seccsion. I believe he will soon come back to ground.


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    Re: about a soccer player

    XX runs for a famous soccer club XX in England. During 2006 and 2007 session, he scored many goals, but during 2007 and 2008 session, he hurt his kness and did not score as many goals as he did during last session. So, he was out during the seccsion. I believe he will soon come back to ground.

    XX plays for the famous soccer club of XX in England. During the 2006-2007 season, he was a high scorer, but injured his knees the following season and was unable to play. I believe he will soon be back on the playing field.

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    Re: about a soccer player

    David L.XX plays for the famous soccer club of XX in England. During the 2006-2007 season, he was a high scorer, but injured his knees the following season and was unable to play. I believe he will soon be back on the playing field.

    Could I say "the 2006-2007 seaons" and "the following seasons"? Please.

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    Re: about a soccer player

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