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    kill bill

    If you see any problems, can I have your comments?

    Kill Bill is the best film he has ever directed. There are a lot of actions and cruel scenes in this movie. But the actions look so real and fascinating.


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    Re: kill bill

    Kill Bill is the best film he has ever directed. There are a lot of actions and cruel scenes in this movie. But the actions look so real and fascinating.
    Kill Bill is the best film he has ever directed.
    There is a lot of action and scenes of cruelty in this movie.

    But the actions look so real and fascinating.
    but: used to introduce something contrasting with what has already been mentioned.
    What is being contrasted?
    I think you are implying that the action doesn't seem staged, contrived, but has a sense of reality about it. This is not made clear in the sentence.

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    Re: kill bill

    Kill Bill is the best film he has ever directed. Although/Despite the fact that there is a lot of action and cruel scenes for my taste, the movie looks so real and fascinating.

    Is this good teachers?




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