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    is this correct ?

    Yes, ABC Company will order the label first and then charge the cost back to us for the past shipment. The cost is USD0.043/pc. However, we have exchanged this procedure in last year, the label will be booked from us instead of them, and the cost we need to pay is same (USD0.43/pc) Do you want to keep this procedure or you prefer ABC Company order this directly? Please advice
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    Unhappy Re: is this correct ?

    Anyone can help ?

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    Re: is this correct ?

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    Yes, the ABC Company will order the label first and then charge the cost back to us for the past shipment. The cost is USD0.043/pc. However, we have -changed this procedure in the last year, so the label will be booked from us instead of them????( sorry, I don't udnerstand this part), and the cost we need to pay is the same (USD0.43/pc) Do you want to keep this procedure or do you prefer the ABC Company to order this directly? Please advice???
    Please, rephrase.

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    Re: is this correct ?

    Quote Originally Posted by heidita View Post
    Please, rephrase.
    Please find my revision, is this better ? Please help to correct again, thanks

    Yes, the ABC Company will order the label first and then charge the cost back to us for the past shipment. The cost is USD0.043/pc. However, we have changed this procedure in the last year, the label is order from us instead of them, and the cost we need to pay is the same (USD0.43/pc). Do you keep to this procedure or do you prefer them to order this directly? Please advice?


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    Re: is this correct ?

    [quote=Zoe2008;281414]Please find my revision, is this better ? Please help to correct again, thanks

    Yes, ABC Company will order the label first and then charge the cost back to us for the previous shipment. The cost is USD0.043/pc. However, last year we changed the procedure so that the label is ordered from us instead of them, although the cost is the same (USD0.43/pc). Will you keep to this procedure or do you prefer them to order this directly? Please advise?[/quote].

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