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    Hi there,
    Can you proofread the following sentences?
    During a visit to an elderly centre last year, I was glad to see the elderly was very eager to learn to use computers. We taught them how to read newspapers, search information and send email on the internet. Throughout the visit, I learnt how to get along with the elderly and obtained a great sense of accomplishment.

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    pete

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    Re: help

    Hi Pete

    What about?

    During my visit to a seniors citizens centre last year, I was glad to see the elderly were very eager to learn to use computers. We taught them how to read newspapers, and how to search information and send email on the internet. Throughout my visit, I learnt how to get along with the elderly, and felt a great sense of accomplishment.

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