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    Post Please correct the following sentences

    Attn: Financial Controller

    As I am planning to take a personal loan from ICICI Bank, but they requested
    me to submit a Salary Transfer Letter. As you are aware, the salary is being transfered to this bank. Please issue a salary transfer letter so that I can obtain this loan as early as possible.

    Thank you for your prompt attention to this request


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    Re: Please correct the following sentences

    When I am planning to take a personal loan from ICICI Bank, they requested me to submit a Salary Transfer Letter. As you know, the salary is being transfered to this bank. Please issue a salary transfer letter so that I can obtain this loan as early as possible.


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    Re: Please correct the following sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by Annecy View Post
    Attn: Financial Controller

    I am planning to take out a personal loan from ICICI Bank, but they requested
    me to submit a Salary Transfer Letter. As you are aware, my salary is being transfered to this bank. Please issue a Salary Transfer Letter so that I can obtain this loan as early as possible.

    Thank you for your prompt attention to this request
    .

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