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    on the street

    If you see any problems, can I have your comments about the following sentence?

    1. When I was young, I travelled to Osaka to play the recorder on a city hall in Osaka.

    2.I participated in the recorder band .

    3.I never saw any waste on Osaka streets.

    4. There were a lot of deer in the park of Osaka and the deer behaved friendly to visitors. They even approaced to the people.
    5. At first, I was afraid of deer , but over time I tried to touch them.
    6. The deer's furs were very smooth, stiff and short.


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    Re: on the street

    Quote Originally Posted by bosun View Post
    If you see any problems, can I have your comments about the following sentence?

    1. When I was young, I travelled to Osaka to play the recorder in the city hall in Osaka. "on the hall" would imply you are sitting on the roof

    2.I participated in the recorder band .

    3.I never saw any waste in Osaka's streets/in the streets of Osaka.

    4. There were a lot of deer in the park of Osaka which were friendly. They even approached the people.

    5. At first, I was afraid of the deer , but over time eventually I tried to touch them.

    6. The deer's coat was very smooth, stiff and short.
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