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1. When I was young, I travelled to Osaka to play the recorder on a city hall in Osaka.
2.I participated in the recorder band .
3.I never saw any waste on Osaka streets.
4. There were a lot of deer in the park of Osaka and the deer behaved friendly to visitors. They even approaced to the people.
5. At first, I was afraid of deer , but over time I tried to touch them.
6. The deer's furs were very smooth, stiff and short.