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    Suitable message

    I have development an insurance product with 23 comprehensive coverage benefits. I intend to import this message into poster. Appreciate if someone is able to let me have the best text to be written on the poster.

    some suggestion:-

    1. comprehensive coverage
    2. 23 benefits
    3. value for money coverage


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    Re: Suitable message

    Quote Originally Posted by jb007 View Post
    I have development an insurance product with 23 comprehensive coverage benefits. I intend to import this message into poster. Appreciate if someone is able to let me have the best text to be written on the poster.

    some suggestion:-

    1. comprehensive coverage
    2. 23 benefits
    3. value for money coverage
    1. is ok
    2. is a little silly- what about "enhanced benefits?"
    3. is bad grammar.


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    Re: Suitable message

    I have developed an insurance product

    with 23 comprehensive coverage benefits.
    Do you mean, it covers the person for 23 individual types of loss and damage?? Or can you give an example of these 'benefits'?


    I intend to include this feature in my advertising. I would appreciate it if someone was able to suggest the best way to express this on a poster.

    some suggestions:-

    1. comprehensive coverage - doesn't every insurance package boast that!?
    2. 23 benefits - can you give us some examples so we can help more with this point
    3. Low, low premiums! or Best value-for-money premiums

    Try out some real hype on us so we can get our mental teeth into it!

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