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    Wedding invitation language

    Please evaluate the following for grammatical errors:
    "It is with joy that Megan and Robert together with their parents ask you to share in a celebration of love as we exchange our marriage vows."


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    Re: Wedding invitation language

    Welcome to the forums.

    Quote Originally Posted by rheslop View Post
    Please evaluate the following for grammatical errors:

    "It is with joy that Megan and Robert together with their parents ask you to share in a celebration of love as we exchange our marriage vows."
    Either "their parents/they exchange/their marriage vows" or [better] "our parents/we exchange/our marriage vows".

    I would also say "invite you".

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    Re: Wedding invitation language

    Anglika,
    Thank you for your help.
    rheslop

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