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    #1

    Please correct my grammar

    This is too late for you mass production starts on May 25. The shipment due date is May 15, and this is a new model we should required for the in-line inspection. Please pull in to May 10. This is required to send 10 pcs shipment samples to the customer; and they will approve and sign back 1 pc to you put on the production line for inspection reference. In order any problem when the mass production beings, please reschedule to us ASAP.
    Last edited by Zoe2008; 27-Apr-2008 at 17:08.


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    Re: Please correct my grammar

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    This is too late for you mass production starts on May 25. The shipment due date is May 15, and this is a new model we should required for the in-line inspection. Please pull in to May 10. This is required to send 10 pcs shipment samples to the customer; and they will approve and sign back 1 pc to you put on the production line for inspection reference. In order any problem when the mass production beings, please reschedule to us ASAP.
    It will be too late for you to start mass production on May 25. The shipment due date is May 15, and as this is a new model we require in-line inspection to be carried out.

    Please pull up production to May 10. It is also a requirement that 10 pcs shipment samples are forwarded to the customer. They will approve and sign 1 pc back to you for reference on the production line inspections.

    In order to avoid any problem when mass production begins, please reschedule and inform us asap.

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