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    Please correct the following sentences

    This is to inform you that Mr. X who has recently joined our company, has requested us for a emergency leave starting from xx.xx.xx to xx.xx.xx to settle his family matters in his home town.

    Also, note that all the expenses will be borne himself.

    Under this circumstances, I would request you to look into the matter and kindly approve the leave requested.

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    Re: Please correct the following sentences

    This is to inform you that Mr. X who has recently joined our company, has requested us for a special leave starting from xx.xx.xx to xx.xx.xx to settle his family matters in his home town.

    Also, note that Mr. X will bear all expenses incurred.

    Under this circumstances, I would like to ask you to look into this matter and kindly approve the leave requested.


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    Re: Please correct the following sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by Annecy View Post
    This is to inform you that Mr. X who has recently joined our company, has requested us for a emergency leave starting from xx.xx.xx to xx.xx.xx to settle his family matters in his home town.

    Also, note that all the expenses will be borne himself.

    Under this circumstances, I would request you to look into the matter and kindly approve the leave requested.
    This is to inform you that Mr. X, who has recently joined our company, has made a request for emergency leave from xx xx xx to xx xx xx, to settle some family matters in his home town.
    Please also note that all expenses incurred will be borne by himself.
    Under the cirumstances, I would ask you to look into the matter and kindly approve the leave requested.

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