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    #1

    could you please correct?

    Hi,
    Bank A is raising their fees again.
    From now on, Ill be charged $22.00 every month.
    I think Ill cancel this bank account and all credit cards, and maintain only the account in bank B.
    Whats your opinion?


    hi,
    could you please correct this text?
    thanks.


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    #2

    Re: could you please correct?

    Looks fine to me.


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    #3

    Thumbs up Re: could you please correct?

    hi! the text is fine, the only thing Id rather change is the second will for going to since you are planning to do it in the near future and it isnt in the "future". the rest is ok for me. bye!

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    #4

    Re: could you please correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by Mzanatta View Post
    hi! the text is fine, the only thing Id rather change is the second will for going to since you are planning to do it in the near future and it isnt in the "future". the rest is ok for me. bye!
    hi,
    yes, I know what you mean. according to my grammar, that's how I should have written it. however, I kind of gave up using ''going to'' for planned actions and "will" for unplanned ones. There are so many exceptions that it isn't worth the concern, I humbly think.
    thanks.

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