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    #1

    experiencing nature

    Can I have your comments about the follwong sentences?

    1. Being with nature often gives you an opportunity to see things in a different view.

    2.Even the reality makes it hard, I repeatedly picture myself being happy with pure love with her.

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    #2

    Re: experiencing nature

    I would write the first sentence like:
    Being with nature often gives you an opportunity to see things from a different view.

    The second one:

    I often picture myself being happy in the pure love with her, even though reality is different, which makes it hard to do so.

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