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  1. Stanislav chayka
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    Can anyone can help me ?

    Hello.
    My native language is Russian, but I need to make an English text for my web site. I have done it, but actually don’t sure that it is correct. Maybe someone can give me some advice what is wrong in this text it will be a really GREAT help for me. Thanks.


    text :

    3d modeling is a creation of virtual three-dimensional model by means of special 3d graphics programs. Being guided by the requirements specification on the basis of client’s wishes, 3d modeler creates volumetric model of any object. Model can be explored in all dimensions and placed in any environment for final visualization.

    3d modeling primary uses: Architectural rendering, Visual effects, Video games, Graphic and web design, Advertising, Interactive presentations

    At current level of 3d technologies development it is difficult for a non-specialist to distinguish modeled object from the real objects on images or videos. In the same time usage of 3d modeled objects instead of real objects has a number of advantages: 1 Ideal appearance of the modeled object – there are no natural defects on a surface, no micro-scratches, ideal illumination and reflections 2.Freedom of foreshortenings – macro shooting, camera flights of the, dynamic object and environment changing 3.Opportunity to visualize objects, which are not exist in real

    3D architectural rendering services provide you a great possibility to get a photorealistic images or videos of how a structure or creation will look, before they are constructed.

    Architectural rendering services are turning out to be highly valuable significant promotional tool in the world of architectural design. It is much easy to communicate with clients and investors when you have high quality presentation materials for your project.

    Interior design workflow starts from the idea. The idea transforms into drawings and sketches that give the overall representation of interior. On the basis of drawings and sketches an interior rendering came up. Only high quality rendering allows you to see and to feel future interior.

    Interior rendering gives you a possibility to estimate all merits and demerits of a planned premise, take care of all nuances and details of an interior: furniture arrangement, colors, decoration and light emitters placement.

    Virtual model of an interior can be easily changed and improved. Estimate future interior design and this will give you a possibility to avoid laborious and expensive corrections.

    Advertising is very important for any business. For today the most effective tool of sales in real estate business is qualitative and bright presentation of your project.

    We can make a really bright graphic materials for your project presentation: photorealistic 3d renderings of exteriors from various foreshortenings, good looking floor cuts and plans, effective video animation.

    “Personal office” is a set of online tools on artvisualization.com site, which was created for clients of our studio. By means of a Personal office you can manage your orders for rendering service in remote work mode.

    Personal office provide you with convenient tools for task management, requirements specification preparation, download section for working materials and communication module for workflow tracking prompt contacts with our project managers.


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    Re: Maybe anyone can help me ?

    My native language is Russian, but I need to write English text for my website. I have done so, but I'm not sure that it is correct. Maybe someone can give me some advice as to what is wrong in this text. It would be a really GREAT help to me. Thanks.


    text :

    3D modelling is creating a virtual three-dimensional model by means of specialized 3D graphics programs. Guided by the client's specifications,

    the 3D modeler creates volumetric model of any object. - this is repeating what you have just said : 'it's about creating a 3D model.

    So:'
    Guided by the client's specifications, the model created can be explored in all dimensions and placed in any environment for final visualization.

    3D modelling has applications in architectural rendering, visual effects, video games, graphic and web design, advertising, and interactive presentations.


    The current level of 3D technology can make the virtual object almost indistinguishable from the real. This has a number of practical advantages for video and still image:
    This is text on a website, so it's good to break the text up rather than a solid block, so:


    1. an ideal representation of the real object – the modelled object has no natural surface defects, no micro-scratches, and has perfect illumination and

    reflections : I'm not sure if this is the best word. I think you mean something like the 'highlight', the area on the object where the light is reflected. Anyone know the technical term?
    2. Freedom with foreshortenings – macro shooting, camera flights of the dynamic object, and environment changing
    3. Visual depiction of fantasy objects

    3D architectural rendering services provide photorealistic images or videos of constructions whilst still in the planning stages. This is proving to be a valuable promotional tool in the world of architectural design, where high quality presentation materials for a project can communicate these ideas visually to clients and investors.

    (there seems a bit of a jump from the paragraph above to this next paragraph - I can't see a direct link. I presume you have shifted from the exterior architectural design to the interior; but the style of writing has changed into a 'tutorial'.

    Interior design workflow starts from the idea. The idea transforms into drawings and sketches that give the overall representation of interior. On the basis of drawings and sketches an interior rendering came up. Only high quality rendering allows you to see and to feel future interior.


    Perhaps you can redraft the text in green along the lines: you have mentioned the exterior design, and communicating ideas; so link this with 'being able to communicate the ideas visually is of paramount importance for interior design and workflow layout.'


    Interior rendering gives you full possibility to evaluate the benefits and drawbacks of planned premises, the larger details and finer points of an interior: furniture arrangement, colour scheme and decor, and sources of illumination.

    Such virtual modelling of an interior, with its capacity for endless trial and error testing and improvement, avoids labourious and expensive corrective alterations later.

    Advertising is very important for any business; and the most effective sales tool in real estate is a full colour presentation of your project.

    We can create photorealistic 3D renderings of exteriors from various foreshortenings, and attractive floor cuts and plans, all with effective video animation.


    Personal Office is a set of on-line tools, accessed on artvisualization.com website, and especially created for clients of our studio. By means of Personal Office, you can manage your orders for rendering services


    in remote work mode. : do you mean, from the comfort of their own office?

    Personal Office provides clients with convenient tools for task management and requirements specification preparation; a download section for working materials; and a communication module for workflow tracking and prompt contact with our project managers.

    NOTE: You are based in Europe, so I have used Brit. Eng. spelling throughout eg labour, colour.
    Last edited by David L.; 08-May-2008 at 10:00.


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    Re: Maybe anyone can help me ?

    I’m so ashamed of my post corrections … :) Thanks a lot for help David.


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    Re: Maybe anyone can help me ?

    You should have seen the red on my essays when I was learning German!

    I've added a little more. It may take me a day or so with everything else.
    Last edited by David L.; 08-May-2008 at 04:01.

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    Re: Maybe anyone can help me ?

    Stanislavchayka, assuming that you are going to make some revisions, please post the revised text here.

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