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    #1

    is this sentence correct?

    Appreciate for your follow up and let Christine call me for this news.

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    #2

    Re: is this sentence correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    Appreciate for your follow up and let Christine call me for this news.
    Hi Zoe

    Your sentence doesn't really make sence, therefore it is not easy to correct. Can you supply more information?

    Stilo

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    #3

    Re: is this sentence correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    Appreciate for your follow up and let Christine call me for this news.
    I appreciate your further information; now let Christine call me to hear it.

    The above is suggested as a possible solution. If in doubt then some more information would be helpful.

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    #4

    Re: is this sentence correct?

    Hi Zoe

    Like the others, I'm not exactly sure of your meaning, but it may be:

    "Could you please have someone follow up for me and ask Christine to let me know as soon as you have any news".

    Hope this is what you intended to say.
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    #5

    Re: is this sentence correct?

    Hi Neillythere,

    Can you take a look for my revision: I appreciate your further information; and advised / told Christine call me this information / news

    Is this sentence work ? Thanks to advise

    Thank you veru much for Stilo, Apex & Neilythere, ardent to help me. I also appreciate for all of you !

    Have a nice weekend

    Regards
    Zoe
    Last edited by Zoe2008; 11-May-2008 at 10:49.

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    #6

    Re: is this sentence correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    Hi Neillythere,

    Can you take a look for my revision: = Can you take a look at my revised wording.

    appreciate your further information; and advised / told Christine call me this information / news

    Is this sentence work ? Thanks to advise = Thanks for your advice.

    Have a nice weekend

    Regards
    Zoe
    Hi Zoe

    That is much better. Use advised Christine to call me. ( told is more if Christine made a mistake originally )

    Thank you veru much for Stilo, Apex & Neilythere, ardent to help me. I also appreciate for all of you ! = Thank you very much to ......... for helping me. I appreciate all of you!

    It is a pleasure Zoe, as you are appreciative and genuinely ask/need our help to improve your English.

    Take care

    Regards Stilo

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    Thank you again Stilo

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