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    #1

    Test drive this sentence!

    Power, performance, luxury, and comfort, which defines your lifestyle

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    #2

    Re: is this sentence correct.......

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    Power, performance, luxury, and comfort, which defines your lifestyle
    What you have witten is not a complete sentence. You need a subject, verb, and punctuation.

    Try: "Your new car has power, performance, luxury, and comfort which defines your lifestyle."

    Cheers,
    Amigo

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    #3

    Re: is this sentence correct.......

    how about

    Power, performance, luxury, and comfort, Hyundai gives you all

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    #4

    Re: is this sentence correct.......

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    how about

    Power, performance, luxury, and comfort, Hyundai gives you all
    new2grammar, it appears that you are taking phrases from a Hyundai promotional advertisement. What is it that you are trying to achieve?

    Cheers,
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    #5

    Re: is this sentence correct.......

    I am trying to frame a sentence based on that, I am advertising student I just need to know is it grammatically perfect,

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    #6

    Re: is this sentence correct.......

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    I am trying to frame a sentence based on that, I am advertising student I just need to know is it grammatically perfect,
    The Hyundai brochure uses short, catchy phrases to get the customer's attention. Hyundai is not interested in grammatical perfection to meet its sales quota!

    A correct sentence would be:

    Hyundai gives you power, performance, luxury, and comfort.

    Cheers,
    Amigo

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    Re: is this sentence correct.......

    I think following sentence is perfect:

    Hyundai, a perfect blend of comfort and style that defines your lifestyle

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    Re: is this sentence correct.......

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    I think following sentence is perfect:

    Hyundai, a perfect blend of comfort and style that defines your lifestyle!
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    #9

    Re: is this sentence correct.......

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    I am trying to frame a sentence based on that, I am advertising student I just need to know is it grammatically perfect,
    1. Make three sentences out of that.
    2. What would be a better title for this thread?


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    #10

    Re: is this sentence correct.......

    Quote Originally Posted by RonBee View Post
    1. Make three sentences out of that.
    2. What would be a better title for this thread?

    Mr. Ronbee..

    Do you have any email adress? or MSN?

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