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    #1

    Any better way to write this??????

    Time you switched on to better profits.

    how about this

    An exciting time for your business begins. Switch on now

    I want to tell that from now your business will see high profit just switch on now
    Last edited by new2grammar; 12-May-2008 at 13:09.


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    Re: Any better way to write this??????

    Your suggestions are not as snappy so do not catch attention.

    The important thing in advertising copy headlibnes is to keep it short and catch the person's attention. Too many words can put them off reading more.

    Want high profits? Switch to xxx company NOW!

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