Anyway, I just gave the essay to my teacher and hopefully he would love it.
Your comments and suggestions are really helpful.
From now on, just make this thread as a discussion.
Migration has an impact on the place the migrant left and also on the place the person moved to. This impact can be both positive and negative.True, but isn't that rather obvious?
Not only humans migrate, but animals do too. It's called animal migration. And it's fairly common. (Notably: the caribou in North America and several bird species.)That might be interesting, but I doubt that it is relevant to your essay. Did you keep it in or take it out?
People move to make a better life for themselves and their families. Sometimes they have no choice but to move.
Can you name one of the most significant migrations of the twentieth century?