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    please correct me these sentence

    1. Sorry for my overlooked your email sent to Ada last Friday. Thanks for your reminder

    2. We had been advance the schedule as per your request; please find the details are as follows: xxx

    3. There are three items which is in the same shipment window and destination. Would you please request your customer consolidate / ship them into one 40’ container in order to save the CFS cost? Please confirm.


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    Re: please correct me these sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    1.I'm sorry. I overlooked your email sent to Ada last Friday. Thanks for your reminder

    2. We had brought forward the schedule as per your request; the details are as follows: xxx

    3. There are three items which are in the same shipment window and destination. Would you please request that your customer consolidate / ship them in one 40’ container in order to save the CFS cost? Please confirm.
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    Re: please correct me these sentence

    Hi Anglika,

    Can I omit "that" in this sentence ?
    Would you please request that your customer consolidate ..........

    Regards
    Zoe


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    Re: please correct me these sentence

    You can, if you rephrase the sentence as: Would you please request your customer to consolidate

    I would prefer the original structure with "that".



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    Re: please correct me these sentence

    Hi Anglika,

    Thank you, you let me to learn more

    Regards
    Zoe

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