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    Kindly correct my para on hockey

    It was an excellent display of skills in today’s match. Hope India continues its performance and beat Malaysia on Saturday to confirm its place in final against Argentina, so we can defeat Argentina in final and take revenge of 5-1 defeat in the league match.

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    Smile Re: Kindly correct my para on hockey

    There was an excellent display of skill in today’s match. I hope India continues its performance by beating Malaysia on Saturday and defeating Argentina in the final to avenge their 5-1 defeat in the league match.

    How's that?

    SB

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    Re: Kindly correct my para on hockey

    that's good thanks a lot

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