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    #1

    please correct me these eassy

    1. Any update after your checking with your factory regarding the incorrect and short shipment for the spare parts? Please advise the status.

    2. Please note the inspection date is changed to 19 May 15:00 instead of 20 May 10:00

    3. After confirm with Billy, he will arrive to our China office on 21 May to discuss with you about the auditor pointed out problem on May 08.

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    #2

    Re: please correct me these eassy

    Hi Zoe

    1. After checking with the factory, do you have an update, yet, about the possible incorrect/short shipment of the spare parts. Please advise.

    2. Please note that the inspection date has been changed from 19th May 15:00 to 20th May 10:00.

    3. I've checked with Billy. He will arrive at our China office on 21st May to discuss, with you, the problem that the auditor pointed out on May 8th.

    Hope this helps
    NT


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    Re: please correct me these eassy

    hi zoe , there is another way you can convey your message.
    have a look at it ,

    1.after checking up with your factory if you have any update about the incorrect or short shipment of the spare parts.please give the status.

    2. please note that the inspection date has been changed from 19 may 15:00 to 20 may 10:00.

    3.after checking up with billy , he will arrive to our china office on may 21 , to discuss the problems with you , that has been pointed out by the auditor on may 8.

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