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    How to write in minimum words?

    A necklace and a pendant with every Balmain Watch. And ó surprise!ó a necklace if you donít purchase anything.

    Kindly tell me how the above sentence can be rewritten with as much minimum words as possible

    Thanks in advance!!

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    A necklace with or without buying a Balmain Watch - and a pendant if you do!

    I can't see any other way of reducing it!

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    Re: How to write in minimum words?

    Quote Originally Posted by Shakespeare's brother View Post
    A necklace with or without buying a Balmain Watch - and a pendant if you do!

    I can't see any other way of reducing it!
    thanks for your suggestion

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