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    Is this text correct?

    Further to our conversation, we notice the mass production will be started on 26 May and finished by 29 May for XC441, please keep an eyes on this schedule and not further delay will be accepted. Thank you for your cooperation.

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    Exclamation Re: Is this text correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    Further to our conversation, we notice the mass production will be started on 26 May and finished by 29 May for XC441, please keep an eyes on this schedule and not further delay will be accepted. Thank you for your cooperation.
    Further to our conversation, we have noted (notice) that mass production would (will) be started on 26 May and completed (finished) by 29 May for XC441, please stick (keep an eyes on) to this schedule as (and not) no further delay will be accepted. Thank you for your cooperation.

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