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    Please help

    My original sentence:
    Containing protein, breast milk is incredible for babies' muscle development.

    Now the other sentence
    Breast milk is better for your child education / intellectual development

    Kindly help me to rewrite the above sentence on the lines of original sentence. There we used protein should I use here ‘iron’ or any other nutrition. Any science experts out there kindly help me

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    Re: Please help

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    My original sentence:
    Containing protein, breast milk is incredible for babies' muscle development.

    Now the other sentence
    Breast milk is better for your child education / intellectual development

    Kindly help me to rewrite the above sentence on the lines of original sentence. There we used protein should I use here ‘iron’ or any other nutrition. Any science experts out there kindly help me
    Containing DHA and AA,breast milk is better for your child's education /intellectual(?)development.

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    Re: Please help

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    Containing DHA and AA,breast milk is better for your child's education /intellectual(?)development.
    Thanks a lot can you please elaborate on what is DHA & AA and by intellectual development I mean brain development is there any other better phrase then this

    Thanks in advance!

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    Re: Please help

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    Thanks a lot can you please elaborate on what is DHA & AA and by intellectual development I mean brain development is there any other better phrase then this

    Thanks in advance!
    It has been scientifically established that DECOSA HEXANOIC ACID and ARACHADOIC ACID improves neural circuitry in brain and enhance memory.These substances are present only in mother's milk.
    Regards,
    rj1948

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    Re: Please help

    Quote Originally Posted by rj1948 View Post
    It has been scientifically established that DECOSA HEXANOIC ACID and ARACHADOIC ACID improves neural circuitry in brain and enhance memory.These substances are present only in mother's milk.
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    'Containing DHA and AA, breast milk is better for your child's education'.

    rather the child education i want to speak about the brain development but indirectly about education only so what is the correct word to be used in the above sentence. Kinldy help

    Thanks in advance.

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    Re: Please help

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    'Containing DHA and AA, breast milk is better for your child's education'.

    rather the child education i want to speak about the brain development but indirectly about education only so what is the correct word to be used in the above sentence. Kinldy help

    Thanks in advance.
    "Containing DHA and AA, breast milk is better for the developement of your child's brain".

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    Re: Please help

    Quote Originally Posted by bhaisahab View Post
    "Containing DHA and AA, breast milk is better for the developement of your child's brain".
    Thanks bhaisahab it's really great sentence I was exactly looking fo rthis...

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    Re: Please help

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    My original sentence:
    Containing protein, breast milk is incredible for babies' muscle development.

    Now the other sentence
    Breast milk is better for your child education / intellectual development

    Kindly help me to rewrite the above sentence on the lines of original sentence. There we used protein should I use here ‘iron’ or any other nutrition. Any science experts out there kindly help me
    I don't like "incredible" in the first sentence. Perhaps:
    Containing protein, breast milk promotes muscle development in babies.
    Second sentence:
    Containing DHA and AA, breast milk is better than formula for the development of your child's brain.

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    Re: Please help

    Quote Originally Posted by RonBee View Post
    I don't like "incredible" in the first sentence. Perhaps:
    Containing protein, breast milk promotes muscle development in babies.
    Second sentence:
    Containing DHA and AA, breast milk is better than formula for the development of your child's brain.
    Is layman will be able to comprehend what DHA and AA is if i write it, as protein is understandable but I doubt about the latter

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    Re: Please help

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    Is layman will be able to comprehend what DHA and AA is if i write it, as protein is understandable but I doubt about the latter
    No, the average person will not know what DHA or AA is. (A brief explanation somewhere in the text would be in order.)


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