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    please correct my two sentences

    1. The factory audit is conduce by every year and the ICTI certificate that I sent to you last week is the latest one, which will be expired on 31 July 2008. The next audit will be conducted in July and the certificate will be issued in August with 12 month validity (Aug 08 to July 09). We will keep you posted on the next certificated

    2. Ida ask me that she would like have a copy when we send the PO to the factory. Would you please advise your team members inculde her a copy?

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    Re: please correct my two sentences

    1. The factory audit is conducted every year, and the ICTI certificate that I sent you last week is the latest one. It expires 31 July 2008. The next audit will be conducted in July and the certificate will be issued in August with 12 months validity (Aug 08 to July 09). We will keep you posted on the next certification.
    2. Ida asked me for a copy of the PO when we send it to the the factory . Please advise your team and include a copy for her .
    Do the parts in bold express your intended meaning?

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    Re: please correct my two sentences

    Hi Soup,

    How about this revision:

    Ida requested a copy for all our outgoing PO, please inform Annie and Steve (follow it). Thanks

    Please take a look again. Thanks

    Regards
    Zoe

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    Re: please correct my two sentences

    Hi Zoe

    What about?
    Ida has requested copies of all outgoing POs. Please inform Annie and Steve about this. Thanks

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    Re: please correct my two sentences

    Hi Soup,

    That is good and much natural. Thank you for your help.

    Good night !

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