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    #1

    is this sentence correct?

    Please note that regarding the shipment for GH234, please contact to Ms. GiGi in the further, her name is in the cc copy. Sandy will follow with other account’s shipment.


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    Re: is this sentence correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    Please note that regarding the shipment for GH234, please contact to Ms. GiGi in the further, her name is in the cc copy. Sandy will follow with other account’s shipment.
    Original statement: Please note that regarding the shipment for GH234, please contact to Ms. GiGi in the further, her name is in the cc copy. Sandy will follow with other account’s shipment.

    Please note that future correspondence for shipment GH234 should be to Ms. GiGi. Her details are included 'in the cc copy' (you could perhaps include more information here e.g. subject of the letter, date, etc. Sandy will follow with the 'other account's shipment' (I don't understand this - who is the 'other account'..is it new account details for the same shipment GH234?)

    Hope this is of some help.

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    #3

    Re: is this sentence correct?

    Hi Scullion,

    How about this revision :

    Please note starting from June, for shipment of GH234 will be handled by Ms. GiGi. Her email address is in the cc copy. Sandy will follow with change to handle other customer account's shipment

    Regards,
    Zoe


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    #4

    Re: is this sentence correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    Hi Scullion,

    How about this revision :

    Please note that, starting from June, the shipment of GH234 will be handled by Ms. GiGi. Her email address is in the cc. Sandy will in future handle the other customer accounts' shipments.

    Regards,
    Zoe
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