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    • Join Date: Apr 2008
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    #1

    Is it correct?

    Hi,

    Is there anybody who can say if this text is correct:

    I am writing to give thanks about the information interest we have received. Furthermore, we would like to inform you that we proceed to record particulars of our entity, on the webside indicated.

    We are at your disposal for possible collaborations


    • Join Date: May 2008
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    #2

    Re: Is it correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by Merce Gómez View Post
    Hi,

    Is there anybody who can say if this text is correct:

    I am writing to give thanks for (not about) the information interest we have received. Furthermore, we would like to inform you that we proceed to record particulars of our entity, on the webside indicated.

    We are at your disposal for possible collaborations
    I'm not sure what "particulars of our entity" is in reference to, so I can't comment on that sentence (however you don't need the comma (,) between "entity" and "on").

    The last sentence looks grammatical.

    I'm sure someone more knowledgable than me can add something more substantial.
    Last edited by colloquium; 29-May-2008 at 14:09.


    • Join Date: Oct 2008
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    #3

    Angry Re: Is it correct?

    You started with 'I' when you are actually refering to a group. 'Webside' should be website.

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