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    #1

    Question just a thought

    Would you correct or comment on my just-a-thought, please?

    Once anight,
    I lied on my bed. I dreamt of you and of that day .
    The day I will tell you I miss you .
    you will tell the same to me .
    I needed you where have you been?
    I missed you ... didn't you miss then !
    I wiil keep my tears to you
    I will keep my smiles for you

    so please ,
    don't go

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    Re: just a thought

    I hope to read your comments and corrections as well


    Thanks in advance

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