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    cows for farming

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    Cows were needed for farming and pigs were expensive, so people started eating dog meat which lived near their houses and cheap as a main source or protain.

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    Re: cows for farming

    Quote Originally Posted by bosun View Post
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    Cows were needed for farming and pigs were expensive, so people started eating dog meat which lived near their houses and cheap as a main source or protain.
    Cows were needed for farming and pigs were expensive, so people started eating the meat of dogs, which lived near thier houses, providing a cheap source of protien.

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    Re: cows for farming

    Quote Originally Posted by bosun View Post
    Can you please give comments about the following sentence?

    Cows were needed for farming and pigs were expensive, so people started eating dog meat which lived near their houses and cheap as a main source or protain.
    As is, it reads, dog meat lived near the people's houses.

    Try,
    Ex: Since cows were needed for farming, and pigs were expensive, people felt they had no other choice but to eat dog meat. The meat was a source of protein, and it was cheap--it came from dogs that lived nearby.

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