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    Kindly check my pargragh

    NAC(company name) provides complete commercial printing solutions for our clients. We are focused upon helping our clients achieve their marketing communications objectives. Our approach is to work in partnership with our clients to fully understand their printing needs before providing the most appropriate solution. We use our expertise on behalf of our clients to deliver fast, high quality and cost effective printing services.

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    Re: Kindly check my pargragh

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    NAC(company name) provides complete commercial printing solutions for our clients. We are focused upon helping our clients achieve their marketing communications objectives. Our approach is to work in partnership with our clients to fully understand their printing needs before providing the most appropriate solution. We use our expertise on behalf of our clients to deliver fast, high quality and cost effective printing services.
    The only change I would make is to replace "apon" with "on".


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    Re: Kindly check my pargragh

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    NAC(company name) provides complete commercial printing solutions for our clients [I would omit this]. We are focused upon helping our clients achieve their objectives in their marketing communications. Our approach is to work in partnership with our clients, aiming to fully understand their printing needs before providing the most appropriate solution. We use our expertise on behalf of our clients[I would omit this] to deliver fast, high quality and cost effective printing services.
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