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    #1

    Post work situation

    ne of our driver Mr. X has refused do the work yesterday as he has complained about headaches and discomfort when driving our truck. He has aked that air conditioning be installed in the driver's cab of the vehicle he drives since last year.
    I request you to look into this matter, and also I request a personal meeting with you for this subject.

    Mr. x also will be coming with me for this meeting.

    Thank you for your prompt assistance


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    #2

    re: work situation

    Quote Originally Posted by JRD View Post
    ne of our driver Mr. X has refused do the work yesterday as he has complained about headaches and discomfort when driving our truck. He has aked that air conditioning be installed in the driver's cab of the vehicle he drives since last year.
    I request you to look into this matter, and also I request a personal meeting with you for this subject.

    Mr. x also will be coming with me for this meeting.

    Thank you for your prompt assistance
    I'm not a teacher. Someone may be able to make more, or better corrections, but I think this sounds better.

    One of our drivers, (thank you Kraken.) Mr. X refused to do the work yesterday as he is experiencing headaches and discomfort when driving our truck. He has aked that air conditioning be installed in the driver's cab of the vehicle which he has been driving since last year.

    I request that you please look into this matter, and also, if possible I would like to arrange a personal meeting with you to further discuss the subject.

    Mr. x will also be coming with me for this meeting.

    Thank you for your prompt assistance
    Last edited by colloquium; 05-Jun-2008 at 10:11.

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    #3

    re: work situation

    Could it be "One of our drivers"?


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    #4

    re: work situation

    Quote Originally Posted by Kraken View Post
    Could it be "One of our drivers"?
    Yes! Of course. It's so obvious now!

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    #5

    re: work situation

    Here's my two cents (I'm not a teacher)

    "One of our drivers, Mr. X, refused to do his work yesterday. He alledges headaches and discomfort when driving our truck and demands air conditioning installed in the cockpit of the vehicle he has been driving for the last year.
    I kindly request you to look into this matter, and I would also suggest a personal meeting with you and Mr. X to discuss this subject.

    Looking forward to hearing from you."

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