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    impeteous personality

    Can I have your comments on the following sentence?

    My teacher always told me to be careful about what I did when I typed his material on the computer, but sometimes because of my impetuous personaliy, I made a lot of mistakes.

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    Re: impeteous personality

    Quote Originally Posted by bosun View Post
    Can I have your comments on the following sentence?

    My teacher always told me to be careful about what I did when I typed his material on the computer, but sometimes, because of my impetuous personaliy, I made a lot of mistakes.
    With the extra comma before "because", it is good.

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