Results 1 to 2 of 2
    • Member Info
      • Native Language:
      • Korean
      • Home Country:
      • Europe
      • Current Location:
      • UK

    • Join Date: Feb 2008
    • Posts: 49
    #1

    please, check my dialogue again



    Hae: If you treat me tonight, I'll forget this because it wasn't so expensive.. How about it?
    Min: That's it??? Wow! You're so generous. Umm, Alright then. Why don't we go to that restaurant? It seems to be very expensive.
    Hae: OK. Then, what time shall we meet?
    Min: Let's see in one hour right here.
    Hae: Good. See you that time.
    Narration: Since that time we have hit it off each other and got married. After one year, I gave birth to twins.

    Coming back to the present time.

    Min: It's forgetful memory. My life has been totally changed by that travel.... and it was really happy for me just to be with him. Hey, I'm hungry...
    Sun: Yes, I'm hungry too. Let's eat something.
    Min: What would you like to eat?
    Sun: Actually I already have made Korean party's noodle. Janchiguksu. Let's go to my house.
    Min: How can I make it?
    Sun: It's very easy to make it. First, Boil the noodle. Second, put sea tangle, a radish, dried anchovies and much water. This is called Su. Put the boiled noodle in a bowl and put the Su. After that, put an egg, carrot and cucumber. That's all.
    Min: Hey, I can't understand anything you said. Let me get that straight. First what??
    Sun: No, no. It's a secret of my recipes. Just eat it. Hahaha ~

    The end

  1. RonBee's Avatar
    • Member Info
      • Native Language:
      • American English
      • Home Country:
      • United States
      • Current Location:
      • United States

    • Join Date: Feb 2003
    • Posts: 16,551
    #2

    Re: please, check my dialogue again

    Quote Originally Posted by Flyby View Post


    Hae: If you treat me tonight, I'll forget this because it wasn't so expensive.. How about it?
    Min: That's it??? Wow! You're so generous. Umm, Alright then. Why don't we go to that restaurant? It seems to be very expensive.
    Hae: OK. Then, what time shall we meet?
    Min: Let's meet in one hour right here.
    Hae: Good. See you that then.

Similar Threads

  1. please, check my dialogue
    By Flyby in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 1
    Last Post: 08-Jun-2008, 15:00
  2. live check to check
    By kpkroy in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 2
    Last Post: 26-Jan-2008, 14:49
  3. Well, we should check out/up on every possibility.
    By angliholic in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 2
    Last Post: 28-Oct-2007, 02:16
  4. plz check small mono dialogue
    By ghai_prince13 in forum Editing & Writing Topics
    Replies: 1
    Last Post: 12-Mar-2007, 06:15
  5. check
    By navi tasan in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 1
    Last Post: 04-Nov-2006, 01:10

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •