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    #1

    some more sentences to correct

    please correct these sentences.

    1.Today it is seemed to rain.So donít forget to close the window.otherwise water would splash through it and make the floor wet.

    2.Today it was downpour.When I got back home from outside,I was all drenched.

    3. Donít step/get inside the home,your legs are full of mud. You will spoil the floor.

    4. Floor is full of water.Why donít u get a damp cloth from kitchen and get the floor wiped.

    5. Cooking is one of the most boring stuff that I ever found.
    Is there any other word that can replace stuff

    Thanks


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    #2

    Re: some more sentences to correct

    Quote Originally Posted by muktha View Post
    please correct these sentences.

    1.Today it is seemed to rain.So donít forget to close the window.otherwise water would splash through it and make the floor wet.

    2.Today it was downpour.When I got back home from outside,I was all drenched.

    3. Donít step/get inside the home,your legs are full of mud. You will spoil the floor.

    4. Floor is full of water.Why donít u get a damp cloth from kitchen and get the floor wiped.

    5. Cooking is one of the most boring stuff that I ever found.
    Is there any other word that can replace stuff

    Thanks
    Hello, muktha.
    Please let me try this one.

    1.Today it (seems that it) is going to rain.So donít forget to close the window, otherwise water would splash through it and make the floor wet.

    2.Today it was a downpour. (I'm not sure about this one.)
    When I got back home from outside, I was all drenched.

    3. Donít step/get inside the home because your legs are covered with mud.(or with your legs covered with mud)
    You will spoil the floor.

    4. Floor is covered with water.
    Why donít you get a damp cloth from the kitchen and get the floor wiped.

    5. Cooking is one of the most boring stuff that I have ever done.

    Is there any other word that can replace stuff How about "thing"?


    I'm not a native speaker of English, so please forgive me if I'm wrong.

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    #3

    Re: some more sentences to correct

    please correct these sentences.

    1.Today it is seemed to rain.So don’t forget to close the window.otherwise water would splash through it and make the floor wet.
    It is likely to rain.today.Don't forget to close the window.Otherwise water will come through it and drench the floor.

    2.Today it was downpour.When I got back home from outside,I was all drenched.
    It was a downpour today,I was drenched when I returned home.

    3. Don’t step/get inside the home,your legs are full of mud. You will spoil the floor.
    Don't come inside the house. Your legs are dirty with mud.You will spoil the floor.

    4. Floor is full of water.Why don’t u get a damp cloth from kitchen and get the floor wiped.
    The floor is wet .Why don't you get a dry cloth and wipe the floor?

    5. Cooking is one of the most boring stuff that I ever found.
    Cooking is one of the most irksome daily chores I have ever found.
    Is there any other word that can replace stuff

    Thanks

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    Re: some more sentences to correct

    Quote Originally Posted by muktha View Post
    please correct these sentences.

    1.Today it is seemed to rain.So don’t forget to close the window.otherwise water would splash through it and make the floor wet.
    It looks like (it will) rain today, so don't forget to close the window. Otherwise (the) water will come in and (make the floor wet)(wet the floor).
    2.Today it was downpour.When I got back home from outside,I was all drenched.
    It was a downpour today. I was drenched when I got home.
    3. Don’t step/get inside the home,your legs are full of mud. You will spoil the floor.
    Don't (come)(go) into the house (like that). Your (feet)(shoes) are very muddy and you will (dirty)(soil) the floor.
    4. Floor is full of water.Why don’t u get a damp cloth from kitchen and get the floor wiped.
    There is a lot of water on the floor. Why don't you get a cloth from the kitchen and wipe the floor.
    5. Cooking is one of the most boring stuff that I ever found.
    Cooking is one of the most boring things I (know)(ever did).

    The above suggestions are the way I would write those sentences, assuming I correctly understood what you want to say.

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    #5

    Re: some more sentences to correct

    Quote Originally Posted by 2006 View Post
    The above suggestions are the way I would write those sentences, assuming I correctly understood what you want to say.
    Thank you, 2006.
    They sound very natural.
    I've learned a lot from you!


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    Re: some more sentences to correct

    1.Today it is seemed to rain.So donít forget to close the window.otherwise water would splash through it and make the floor wet.
    Today it seems to be raining, so don't forget to the close the window; otherwise, water will/may splash through and make the make the floor wet.

    2.Today it was downpour.When I got back home from outside,I was all drenched.
    Today it was pouring. When I got back home, I was drenched. (Drenched means completed wet, so you don't need all.)

    3. Donít step/get inside the home,your legs are full of mud. You will spoil the floor.
    Don't go in (inside) the house. Your legs are covered with mud. You'll get the floor all dirty.

    4. Floor is full of water.Why donít u get a damp cloth from kitchen and get the floor wiped.
    The floor is is all wet. Why don't you get a cloth from the kitchen and wipe it up?

    5. Cooking is one of the most boring stuff that I ever found.
    Is there any other word that can replace stuff
    Cooking is one of the most boring chores/tasks that I have ever done.
    Thanks

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