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    • Join Date: May 2008
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    Kindly proof read this

    Mr. Jitesh told me on Saturday that you won’t be continuing.. Are you sticking to advertising or moving out of it? I had learnt a lot from you in a short span of time. As you stay in the vicinity, so we can catch up with each other any time. One bad news for me last week was one of my dogs passed away, he was very close to me.
    This Wednesday I will go to Bydesigner and chalk out my final plan with the organization, at this point of my career I need to take decision by considering every parameters keeping long-term in the mind. I will keep your updated, and be in touch.
    All the best for your future assignments.


    • Join Date: May 2008
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    Re: Kindly proof read this

    Mr. Jitesh told me on Saturday that you won’t be continuing.. Are you sticking to advertising or moving out of it? I learnt a lot from you in a short span of time. If you are staying in the vicinity/area, please keep in touch so we can catch up with each other from time to time.
    News is noncount: I have some bad news from last week. I have a piece of bad news/a bit of bad news from... Something bad happened (to me) last week). One of my dogs passed away; he was very close to me.

    This Wednesday I will go to Bydesigner and chalk out my final plans with the organization. At this point in my career I need to take a decision by considering all options open to me, keeping the long-term in the mind. I will keep you updated and be in touch.

    All the best for your future assignments.


    • Join Date: May 2008
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    Re: Kindly proof read this

    Change keeping the long-term in the mind to keeping the long-term in mind.

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