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    #1

    Post Kindly correct the following sentences

    1. As you are aware, the above defective item is not available in the local market.
    This bulb doesn't has long life, it is getting fused frequently. Last time our request was
    24 pcs, but you have orderd only 8pcs. so please arrange to purchase it from your overseas supplier as soon as possible as we don't have anything in stock.


    2. Which one is correct ?
    Payment is not yet released, Payment not yet released or No payment has been released



    • Join Date: May 2008
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    Re: Kindly correct the following sentences

    I hope I correctly understood what you were trying to say:

    1. As you are aware, the above defective item is not available in the local market.
    This bulb doesn't have a long life, so it burns out quickly.

    We regret that, although you ordered 24 items, we only have 8 items in stock, so you will need to purchase the item from your overseas supplier as soon as possible.


    2. Which one is correct ?
    Payment is not yet released, Payment not yet released or No payment has been released.

    The first one and the last one are complete sentences. "Payment not yet released" would not be OK in a letter. However, you might see it stamped (=printed with a stamp) on an invoice.

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