supervision / monitor ?

[Zoe2008]

Our customer Mr. Wong will come to your factory to supervision / monitor the container loading on June 12.

[rj1948]

Our customer Mr. Wong will come to your factory to supervision / monitor the container loading on June 12.

Monitor is correct .

[vil]

or ... to supervise....

Regards.

V.

[rj1948]

or ... to supervise....

Regards.

V.

vil, in a previous thread ,she complained about improper loading in a container.Hence ,monitor.
Regards,
rj1948.

[BobK]

Or, indeed, 'to oversee'. ("Short words are best..." Churchill - and he should know, he wasn't just a statesman; he won the Nobel prize for literature in 1953 - Nobel Prize in Literature - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia Wikipedia says in but I prefer for.)

NOTE: 'oversee' [=supervise] does NOT mean the same as 'overlook' [=fail to notice].

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[vil]

Hi rj948,

To my thinking there are no two ways about it: both are correct

to monitor = check, detect,follow,keep an eye on, keep track of, keep under surveillance, note, observe, plot, record, scan, supervise, survey, trace, track, watch.

to monitor = to keep close watch over; supervise: monitor an examination.

Our customer Mr. Wong will come to your factory to monitor the container loading on June 12.=Our customer Mr. Wong will come to your factory to supervise the container loading on June 12.

Regards.

V.

[vil]

Hi BobK,

I am in full agreement on all points of your well sustained post.

Regards.

V.

[rj1948]

Hi rj948,

To my thinking there are no two ways about it: both are correct

to monitor = check, detect,follow,keep an eye on, keep track of, keep under surveillance, note, observe, plot, record, scan, supervise, survey, trace, track, watch.

to monitor = to keep close watch over; supervise: monitor an examination.

Our customer Mr. Wong will come to your factory to monitor the container loading on June 12.=Our customer Mr. Wong will come to your factory to supervise the container loading on June 12.

Regards.

V.

Yes.I agrree. I preferred moniter to oversee ,as she had complained that the container(ship) had been dirty with grease.
Thanks Vil.
rj1948.

[Soup]

Mr. Wong, the customer, will be at your factory on June 12 to oversee loading the container.

Note that, monitor implies feedback.

[vil]

oversee (verb) = to direct and watch over the work and performance of others: boss, overlook, superintend, supervise, watch over.


Feedback is usually a feature of automation.

Regards.

V.