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    #1

    please help for these sentences

    The customer is request send them the photo to show the correct parts instead of inspection which to be save the manpower. Therefore, I will not arrange our QC for inspection, but will keep them the correct photos for (their) reference.

    I heard from Chris that all the goods had sent to you on June 09. Please confirm all the goods are no problem after received. So that we can arrange payment (USDxxx) to them

    Our customer will not visit your plastic injection factory for June 13. We will keep you posted for their next visit time. Appreciate for your arrangement


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    #2

    Re: please help for these sentences

    How does this sound?

    to request that someone do something:

    Instead of having an actual inspection, the customer has requested that we send the photo to send photos of the correct parts instead, in order to save time and manpower. Therefore, I will not arrange for our QC to have an inspection, but I will keep the correct photos for their reference.

    I heard from Chris that all the goods were sent to you on June 9. Please confirm that all the goods have been received in good condition so we can arrange for payment (USDxxx).

    Our customer will not be able to visit your plastic injection factory on June 13. We will keep you posted as to their next visit.

    We appreciate for your arrangement.


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    #3

    Re: please help for these sentences

    Oops! The first sentence should read:

    Instead of having an actual inspection, the customer has requested that we send photos of the correct parts instead, in order to save time and manpower.

    You can also say:

    In lieu of an actual inspection, the customer has requested
    In lieu of means in place of.

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    #4

    Re: please help for these sentences

    Hi Vivemafille,

    Please review the revision for sentence 1)

    The customer has requested that we send photos of the correct parts instead of inspection ....

    Is this ok? Thanks to advice

    Regards
    Zoe


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    Re: please help for these sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    Hi Vivemafille,

    Please review the revision for sentence 1)

    The customer has requested that we send photos of the correct parts instead of carrying out an inspection ....

    Is this ok? Thanks to advice

    Regards
    Zoe
    That looks fine, with a minor change.

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