Results 1 to 3 of 3
    • Member Info
      • Native Language:
      • Korean
      • Home Country:
      • South Korea
      • Current Location:
      • China

    • Join Date: Jan 2008
    • Posts: 1,628
    #1

    Please correct my grammar

    Jenny is plan to the inspection on June 16 and supervision the container loading on June 25. But we need to catch the vessel closing on June 23 to fulfill the latest shipment for June 25. Is it possible to arrange the supervision on June 18? Please confirm.

  1. #2

    Re: Please correct my grammar

    See corrections below.

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    Jenny is planning for the inspection on June 16 and the supervision of the container loading on June 25. But, we need to catch the vessel closing on June 23 to fulfill the latest shipment for June 25. Is it possible to arrange the supervision on June 18? Please confirm.

    • Member Info
      • Native Language:
      • Oriya
      • Home Country:
      • India
      • Current Location:
      • India

    • Join Date: Mar 2008
    • Posts: 2,121
    #3

    Exclamation Re: Please correct my grammar

    You can try the following with some marginal change.

    Jenny is planning (to) for the inspection on June 16 and the supervision of the container loading on June 25. But we need to catch the vessel which closes (closing) on June 23 to fulfill the latest shipment for June 25. Is it possible to arrange the supervision on June 18 instead of June 25? Please confirm.
    Last edited by sarat_106; 12-Jun-2008 at 16:59.

Similar Threads

  1. What is the correct grammar?
    By dragonwolf in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 4
    Last Post: 17-Feb-2008, 07:15
  2. correct faults of vocabulary, grammar or orthography
    By mgc in forum CVs, Resumes and Applications
    Replies: 1
    Last Post: 16-Dec-2007, 09:18
  3. Is the grammar of this sentence correct?
    By albertage in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 3
    Last Post: 27-Oct-2007, 08:23
  4. Correct Grammar
    By Anonymous in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 2
    Last Post: 24-Sep-2004, 09:28
  5. correct grammar
    By Anonymous in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 2
    Last Post: 11-Feb-2004, 23:45

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •