Student or Learner
A lifetime of moments where even the wind and the sun, the stars and the sky, are humbly awaiting your command. For a family used to royal treatment and luxurious living. Picture perfect, an enchanting fairy story ready and waiting to be experienced and cherished for a lifetime.
Is the above para grammatically correct, any changes needed to make it more sophisticated
Native English speakers would not say "fairy story" they would say "fairy tale." I'm unsure of the context of the above paragraph, but I don't see any other errors.