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    #1

    is this text ok?

    "the exchange of the laptop by a brand new one was consented by the factory only because you sent it to repair right after it broke down.
    if you kept using the laptop, opting to send it to fix just when it had a complete crush, they would never agree with an exchange."

    please, is this text fine?

    thanks


    • Join Date: Oct 2006
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    #2

    Re: is this text ok?

    Quote Originally Posted by jctgf View Post
    "The exchange of the laptop for a brand new one was agreed by the factory only because you sent it to be repaired right after it broke down.
    If you had kept using the laptop, opting to send it to be fixed only when it had had a complete crash, they would never agree to an exchange."

    please, is this text fine?

    thanks
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